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Saturday, February 27, 2010

My poetry SUCKS

Triumphantly, we stand
Glaring at the world.
We're the worst but
We're better than they.
They don't even know.
They don't even care.
Do we even care?
We are warriors--How now?
The world is our litterbox.
We are housecats.
Gao gao!

1 comment:

  1. No it doesn't, your writing is awesome. Made me laugh, think, and slightly sad in 11 short lines. We care because we think that they care. Simply put. Since we know they don't care, it makes caring about anything stressful. Sorry, my un-needed two sense. Nice piece btw.

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